Need to learn in the school, also need to learn in the home, altogether, where be to must want to learn.
在学校里需要学习，在家里也需要学习，总而言之，在哪儿都必须要学习。
The time that is not in the school, most person thinks oneself and study had nothing to do, did not need to learn, is the fact really such? Either, begin me also so think, till the —— after the thing that day happens
不在学校的时间，大多数人都认为自己与学习无关了，不需要学习了，事实真的是这样吗？不是的，开始我也这么认为，直到那天的事情发生后——
I was put learn, go on the alley that come home alone, tian Wuai mists, there is damp vapor in air, dragonfly is low fly. . . . . .
我放了学，独自走在回家的小路上，天雾霭霭的，空气中弥漫着湿漉漉的水蒸气，蜻蜓低飞......
In bend mouth, have a large garbage can, there always are a lot of flies there, I very cold-shoulder, avoid on foot far, I lose the rubbish conveniently in the hand incidentally, regrettablly rubbish was not lost into, I also am in charge of, directly forward domestic direction went, going, I encountered a cleaner, she is looking me up and down up and down, it is very strange that I am looked at, the hair disgust from the heart these people, because there always is an acerbity stink on these person.
在拐弯口，有一个大垃圾桶，那儿总是有许多苍蝇，我十分嫌弃，走路都避的远远的，我顺便把手中的垃圾随手一丢，可惜垃圾没丢进，我也不去管，径直朝着家的方向走了，走着走着，我遇到了一位清洁工，她正上下打量着我，我看着十分奇怪，发自内心的厌恶这些人，因为这些人身上总带着一股酸臭味。
Still issued rain eventually, I walk along next taking shelter from rain to bus platform, inopportune is, she also took shelter from rain, move goes up by the side of my go toing move, she says genially to me: “ girl, did you just lose a rubbish? ” I nod, think: Lost a rubbish to look for me even, is collecting rubbish to belong to their profession originally? She is stood by to me, with ought not belong to her the little bag that the hand that that age Duan Man is a callosity takes out Tibet cautiously to had lapped in the pocket, gave I, say: “ this key is yours, when I just collected preparation to put garbage can, there is the small key of a pink inside discovery, I think be you certainly, I helped you be brushed, give you. ”
终于还是下了雨，我走到公交车站台下避雨，不巧的是，她也来避雨了，我往边上挪了挪，她和蔼地对我说：“小姑娘，你刚刚是不是丢了个垃圾啊？”我点了点头，并想：丢了个垃圾还要来找我，捡垃圾本来不是就属于他她们的职业吗？她向我靠近，用本该不属于她那个年龄段满是老茧的手小心翼翼地拿出藏在口袋里包裹好的小袋子，并交给了我，说：“这把钥匙是你的吧，我刚刚捡到了准备放到垃圾桶时，发现里面有一把粉色的小钥匙，我想一定是你的，我帮你擦了一下，给你。”
My suddenly be enlightened, changed pair of cleaner at a draught people view, the eye became acerbity, had received the key immediately, thank even track. Discover suddenly, there is a kind of special sweet smell on his their body, this kind of fragrance makes the person feels particularly happy.
我恍然大悟，一下子就改变了对清洁工们的看法，眼睛酸了一下，立马接过钥匙，连声道谢。突然发现，他她们身上有一种特别的香味，这种香味使人感觉特别愉快。
This is a bagatelle, but to me it is an important matter, after wherefrom, I was changed to everybody's view, taking coloured eye to see them no longer.
这是一件小事，但对于我来说是一件大事，从那之后，我对所有人的看法都改变了，不再带着有色眼睛看他们了。
I return the home, listen to this thing repeat to mom, mom also was moved by this, this undeserved do we learn? This also is classroom! We should learn where!
我回到家，把这件事复述给妈妈听，妈妈也被此打动了，这难道不值得我们学习吗？这也是课堂啊！我们在哪儿都要学习！
The adviser comments on:
导师点评：
The more in the bigger than the school classroom that the big classroom of the life needs to learn, young writer can have this consciousness, already very marvellous! Young writer in the begining cold-shoulder detest the goodness with cleaner aunt both between formed contrast, more outstanding the goodness of cleaner aunt. At the same time, through this one before one hind change, idea of young writer change and understanding with respect to success will come when conditions are ripe, follow a rational line to do some work well. Whole says, young writer was shown full energy, whole text structure is whole at the same time, clarity of a general name for arteries and veins, expression is proper, write so that be full of consecution sex. Still have, young writer also is done well in respect of wording and phrasing, showed not the language character strength of common, good to write this piece the composition provided safeguard.
生活的大课堂需要学习的比学校大课堂里的更多，小作者能有这个意识，已经很棒啦！小作者开始时的嫌弃厌恶与清洁工阿姨的善良两者之间形成了对比，更突出了清洁工阿姨的善良。同时呢，经过这一前一后变化，小作者转变观念与认识就水到渠成，顺理成章了。整体说来，小作者表现出了满满的正能量，同时整篇文章结构完整，脉络清晰，表达得当，写得富有条理性。还有，小作者在遣词造句方面亦做得不错，表现出了不俗的语言文字功底，为写好本篇作文提供了保障。