He, the hobby is free, great romanticism poet, lay Buddhist of date green lotus, call “ ” of blame celestial being. Who is he? He is the object that I adore, he calls Li Bai!
他，爱好自由，伟大的浪漫主义诗人，号青莲居士，称“谪仙人”。他是谁？他是我崇拜的对象，他叫李白！
Li Bai most propbably everybody understands him somewhat, one of poets with the most crackajack Tang Dynasty. His poetic wind is bold and generous and elegant, by countless people recital. Diffusing in that air in the times with sweet book, created a light heavenly body, a detached poetic plum is white. Li Bai's work has a lot of, the theme of creation also has a lot of. The poetry that he makes, pure and fresh handsome stride atmosphere boundless, imposing manner is dye-in-the-wood. And Li Bai not only what the poem does is good, fencing also very Oh, the name that still has celestial being of a sword. Common people says Li Taibai is bookman poet, what be inferior to saying he is magician of an all corners of the country comes is a few apter. 10 paces of “ kill one person, a thousand li does not stay row. Thing stroke garment goes, hide result and name. What ” describes is Li Bai's excellent fencing.
李白想必大家对他都有所了解，唐代最杰出的诗人之一。他的诗风豪迈而飘逸，被无数人吟诵。在那个空气中都弥漫着书香的时代里，缔造了一颗明亮的星，一位超然的诗人李白。李白的作品有很多，创作的主题也有很多。他所作的诗歌，清新俊迈大气磅礴，气势十足。而且李白不仅诗做的好，剑术也十分了得，还有一个剑仙的称号呢。世人都说李太白是文人骚客，倒不如说他是一个江湖术士来的更贴切一些。“十步杀一人，千里不留行。事了拂衣去，深藏功与名。”形容的就是李白高超的剑术。
Natural I adore Li Bai, the adored fencing that also is him not merely, still have him that distinct personality. Li Bai is not shown with the scholarly honour and official rank all one's life, however the body with the commoners and contempt influential officials, unbridled ground mocks the political phenomenon with critically and corrupt no use, the attitude with bold feudal revolt, advanced the acting heroic creed drive when Cheng Tang. He detests lay each trying to cheat the other, yearning move calms and free peach source lives, be far from the intrigue against each other of dirt of the world every. This plants Li Bai world-weary common, oppose the thought creed drive of influential officials, wear subsequently rose what his life carries out is rich and increasingly self-consciously with maturity.
自然我崇拜李白，崇拜的也不只是他的剑术，还有他那独特的个性。李白一生不以功名显露，却以布衣之身而藐视权贵，肆无忌惮地嘲笑和批判腐败无用的政治现象，大胆反抗封建的姿态，推进了盛唐时代的英雄主义精神。他厌恶世俗的尔虞我诈，向往着平静而自由的桃源生活，远离人世凡尘的勾心斗角。李白这种厌世俗，反权贵的思想主义精神，随之着他的生活实践的丰富而日益自觉和成熟起来了。
Li Bai's lifetime is legend. He is junior become famous, fasten on poetic book gifted, get when 15 years old the appreciation of a few public figures. After that errant the various states swims visit all sorts of famous mountains and great rivers, a person with lofty ideals of associate with all corners of the land. Li Bai's expression very make public, let a person want to sell eternally anxious in all with him only. However, life is not as too much as the thing of meaning, everybody perhaps feels this scene is infinite, the great poet that have a boundless future also Ceng Yin is out at the elbows at Chang'an, must as blackguardly as those marketplace apprentice associate with. But lay Fan Chen's diversionary skin bursa that is him, his spirit and ideology broke through this to have a body already, fly to distance!
李白的一生是传奇的。他年少成名，在诗书上别有天赋，15岁时就受到一些社会名流的欣赏。而后周游列国游访各种名山大川，结交五湖四海有志之士。李白的神采十分张扬，让人只想与他共销万古愁。然而，人生不如意的事太多了，大家也许都觉得这位风光无限，前途无量的大诗人也曾因穷困潦倒于长安，不得不与那些个市井无赖之徒为伍。但是世俗凡尘牵制的只是他的皮囊，他精神和思想意识早已冲破了这具肉体，飞向了远方！
Li Bai a world-weary common, turn over the poet of great sentiment romance of influential officials, roam freely all over the world all one's life, still defeated reality eventually. But his volition still perpetuation my heart. The Li Bai of ” of celestial being of God —“ blame that he is me!
李白一个厌世俗，反权贵的伟大情操浪漫诗人，一生浪迹天涯，终还是败给了现实。但是他的意志依然永存我心。他是我的偶像—“谪仙人”李白！
Author: Fu Saiting
作者：付思婷
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导师点评：
The article is in depict narrate respect special atmosphere, stressed your delineator thing very well, this are done very well. What the to Li Bai life in the composition is experienced and his poetry style holds is very accurate, write Li Bai's fencing especially, let me think of “ of a word from ” of dream of a person adept in martial arts and given to chivalrous conduct of ancient prose person, this word is used in Li Bai to go up personally again appropriate did not pass. Your composition language air, of great momentum, read rise bright able to read aloud fluently, leave deep impression to the reader. Nevertheless, there also are a few flaws in the composition, the disposition that is pair of Li Bai then holds forbid, the ” of peach source life that says yearning and quiet and Li Bai “ is free among you, this uses appearance contented deep pool bright more appropriate, li Bai's disposition is not such, this need you to notice again!
本文在描写记叙方面非常大气，很好的突出了你描写的人物，这一点做得很好。作文中对李白的人生经历和他的诗歌风格把握的非常准确，尤其是写到李白的剑术，让我想到一句话“自古文人侠客梦”，这句话用在李白身上再合适不过了。你的作文语言大气，气势磅礴，读起来朗朗上口，给读者留下深刻的印象。不过，作文中也有一些瑕疵，那就是对李白的性格把握不准，你中间说李白“向往平静而自由的桃源生活”，这个用来形容陶渊明更合适，李白的性格不是这样的，这一点需要你再注意一下！
Directive teacher: Zhang Xueqin
指导老师：章雪琴