When coming to here again, everything is inferior to once upon a time ……
再一次来到这里时，一切都不如从前了……
A few days ago, we a grandma home that returned for a long time 3 times to was not answered. Just presented village opening, discover everything changed appearance. Stand everywhere had one flickering bridal chamber.
前几天，我们一家三口回到了许久没回的奶奶家。刚进村口，便发现一切都变了样。到处都竖起了一幢幢新房。
Not a little while, the car sailed alley child the grandma home in, did not see a grandma however into the door, need not wanting to know the grandma is decided is attend in backyard she raises a chicken. As expected, the grandma moves bench outside henhouse, feed at the same time feed wear with their long-winded at the same time what.
不一会儿，车驶到了巷子深处的奶奶家，进门却没看到奶奶，不用想便知道奶奶定是在后院照料她养小鸡了。果然，奶奶把凳子搬在了鸡舍外，一边喂食一边跟它们絮叨着什么。
“ grandma! I call ” aloud, look to the chickling young in the circle. “ dear me, you came, I should cook rapidly. ” grandma sees me, brush the hand on the dress rapidly, touch my head, “ good granddaughter, did hunger become bad? How to shift to an earlier date accost? ” is saying to go to old house.
“奶奶！”我大声喊到，并看向圈里的小鸡仔。“唉哟，你们来了，我要赶紧去做饭了。”奶奶见我，赶紧把手在衣服上擦了擦，摸了摸我的脑袋，“乖孙女，饿坏了吧？怎么不提前招呼一声呢？”说着就向老屋走去了。
After the grandma goes, I admire a head to looking at blue sky, discovery already was inferior to this day when general azure blue, had become a gray. The house all round seemed to be torn open built again. Thinking, I look to village mouth, well, how was the large pagoda tree of village mouth done not have? I remember suddenly, a period of time before the grandma has told me in phone within, the large tree that in one's childhood everybody enjoys the cool together, was chopped, that moment is listening to care nothing, but when I see this one act truly, can't help having some of ineffable sadness ……
奶奶走后，我仰头望着蓝天，发现这天已不如儿时一般湛蓝，已经变成了一片灰色。周围的房子好像都拆了重造了。想着，我向村口望去，咦，村口的大槐树怎么没了？我忽然想起，奶奶前一阵子在电话里头告诉过我，小时候大家一起乘凉的大树，被砍了，那时候听着不以为意，但当我真正看到这一幕时，不禁有些莫名的悲伤……
In one's childhood, this always gets together below large pagoda tree full person. Xia Ye, enjoying the cool below large tree is agreeable most. Everyday towards evening, I always like to wait for beside the grandma. The grandma always is shaking fan pats a mosquito for me at the same time, talk cheerfully and humourously with neighborhood at the same time. Bright and clear laugh makes Xia Ye more quiet. Sometimes I also am met and young associate people play hide-and-seek below the pagoda tree together, hide cat, lively laugh is in pagoda tree all around resound. Na Jiaojie's moon, the cool wind of blow gently, cry with the cicada with ringing move, the ground like Dou Shiyi is engraved in my heart.
小时候，这大槐树下总聚满了人。夏夜，在大树下乘凉最是适意。每天傍晚，我总喜欢待在奶奶身边。奶奶总是一边摇着扇子为我拍走蚊虫，一边与邻里谈笑风生。爽朗的笑声让夏夜更加静谧。有时我也会和小伙伴们一起在槐树下捉迷藏、躲猫猫，欢快的笑声在槐树四周回荡。那皎洁的月光，习习的凉风，和着清脆的蝉鸣，都诗一般地刻在我心中。
This, weigh countryside coming home, everything changed appearance. Ethereal moon, as if so not bright and limpid, cool wind is blown so that let a person deeply chill, and cicada cries is to disappear in peaceful dim light of night more. This village, I once had gone countless times, it accompanied me to spend optimum the happiest childhood, why to let me feel some are unfamiliar however nowadays?
这一次，重回家乡，一切都变了样。天上的月亮，仿佛不那么明澈了，凉风吹得让人不胜寒意，而蝉鸣更是消失在幽静的夜色中。这个村庄，我曾经无数次走过，它伴我度过了最适宜最快乐的童年，为什么如今却让我觉得有些陌生呢？
This composition returns old home with the author a such setting are an added ingredient, next, undertake go into particulars to the process such as a variety of change and the endless past that think of from this seeing in native place. The author is written to be in in article look up at a sky to see a dusky, pullback feeling from this when childhood, that moment still has azure day, have the large pagoda tree before the door, have the engage in small talk with lively people, have great rustic affection, very much now having disappearinging slowly, in this process, language depict, motion picture, environment depict waits, much angle presents an author to hold to the whole of whole episode, content makes the same score solid and rich feeling. Of course, the theme of the article is OK somewhat bend is heavy, if be the change of the person that should compose,the psychology that brings to oneself is pounded, transfer in front can write less as far as possible, enter a text as soon as possible, it is better to can make the gist of whole article gets so reflect.
这篇作文以作者回到老家这样一个场景为引子，接下来，对在老家看到种种变化以及由此想到的无尽往事等过程进行详细叙述。文中写到作者在仰望天空看到一片灰蒙蒙，并由此将思绪拉回到童年时，那时候还有蔚蓝的天，有门前的大槐树，有人们热闹的攀谈，有浓浓的乡村情意，现在很多都已经慢慢在消失，在这个过程中，有语言描写、动作描写、环境描写等，多角度呈现出作者对整个事件的整体把握，内容平实而富有感情。当然，文章的主题可以有所倾重，如果是要写作者的变化给自己带来的心理冲击，前面过渡可以尽量少写，尽快入主题，这样可以使整个文章的主旨得到更好的体现。