It is probably a day two years ago, that is a night that makes a person impressive, I still remember up to now, that aged back. . . . . .
大概是两年前的一天了吧，那是一个令人印象深刻的夜晚，我至今还记得，那个苍老的背影......
That day, ground of my to walk gingerly goes upstairs, open the door gently, go in stealthily, close gently again, do not get a bit voice as far as possible, but, mom's ear resembled installing a detector today, just closed the door, hear: “ you came back eventually. ”
那天，我蹑手蹑脚地上楼，轻轻地打开门，悄悄地走进去，再轻轻地关门，尽量不弄出一点声音，但是，今天妈妈的耳朵就像装了一个探测器，刚关上门，就听见一句：“你终于回来了。”
“ is right right, you you, did the meal have? ” my insecurity must stammer.
“对对对啊，你你们，饭吃了吗？”我紧张得都结巴了。
What meal does “ still eat? The grandfather goes looking for you, had not come back! ” mom increased volume suddenly, say aloud.
“还吃什么饭啊?爷爷去找你，还没回来呢！”妈妈突然提高了音量，大声说。
“ what? ” I am open-eyed ground pop eye.
“什么？”我惊讶地瞪大眼睛。
The grandfather is all along most be fond of me, he goes looking for me also is in me expected, but, rain just fell outside, had not come back now. . . . . .
爷爷一向是最疼我的，他去找我也是在我的意料之中，但是，外面刚刚下起了雨，现在还没回来......
Did he go to “ how long? I ask ” nervously.
“他去了多久了？”我紧张地问。
“ goes out 4:30, do you calculate? ”
“四点半出门，你算算？”
I looked horological. ” my light tone says “ 6:30, “ two hours. ” I am silent return a room, put down satchel, take out work, carry the first stroke of a Chinese character, think static heart writes line of business, but the eye glances sideways by the side of past Zhong Na all the time.
我看了一眼钟表。“六点半”我轻声说，“两个小时了。”我沉默着回到房间，放下书包，拿出作业，提起笔来，想静心写作业，但眼睛一直往钟那边瞟。
At 7 o'clock, seven, seven, seven, at 8 o'clock. . . . . .
七点，七点十五，七点三十，七点四十五，八点......
I couldn't help eventually, run to the front of the window, staring at closely downstair. Rain has stopped outside, on the ground a damp, a few trees before the door are in wind twist, the purpose shakes the water that goes up personally tremble clean. In darkness, I see a people, striding big step, going strong and vigorously ahead, but show slightly again aged, that is a grandfather! I do not say to give a word to come, do not know how to should face him.
我终于忍不住了，跑到窗前，紧盯着楼下。外面雨已经停下，地上湿漉漉的一片，门前的几棵树在风中扭动，企图把身上的水抖抖干净。黑暗中，我看到一个人影，迈着大步子，矫健地向前走着，但又略显苍老，那是爷爷！我说不出话来，不知道该怎么面对他。
I opened the door to the grandfather, he sees me, the scowl on the face disappeared, the surprise has some of blame ground to say again: “ oh You, do you go which? It is good that I looked for you long! Arrive home from the school in, reach other place again, was about so urgently that my within an inch of calls your father to call the police! Oh You. . . . . . ”
我给爷爷开了门，他一见到我，脸上的愁容就消失了，惊喜又有些责怪地说：“哦呦，你去哪了？我找了你好久了！从学校到家里，再到其他地方，急得我差点喊你爸就要报警了！哦呦......”
The excessive in my eye became full tear, say: I go to “ uncle home, you did not worry, good, I did not go much further. . . . . . ”
我眼中溢满了泪水，说：“我到叔叔家了，你不要担心了，好不好，我没走多远......”
This look can not want after “ , you look to still look for you so long, where to go to later, waiting for me to receive. Grandpa ” is knitting brows to say.
“以后可不要这样子喽，你看还找你找那么长时间，以后不要去哪儿了，等着我来接吧。”爷爷皱着眉头说。
“ hum. ” I nod.
“嗯嗯。”我点了点头。
Since then, I just understand eventually, there is a kind of person on the world, they do not like to be before the person look good as result of recieving praise, like to be paid silently for you in your backside however. . . . . .
自那以后，我才终于明白，世界上有一种人，他们不喜欢在人前露脸，却喜欢在你的背后默默地为你付出......
This article has new idea very much, most article is to write his to come home late reason, but the author is in this article, showed a kind of more touching close sentiment to us from another angle however, oneself come home already very late, but not be the latest however, the time that the grandfather comes home is later, his love is deep, very original an article, article the behavioral picture to the character very figure, of the nervous uneasiness oneself and grandfather was anxious to be reflected racily come out. But article content has a few not quite join natural, for instance oneself come home late very nervous, but preamble should make a few bedding, and the grandfather is very anxious, mom looks some however insipid, such scene is not quite reasonable also, notice detail.
这篇文章很有新意，大多数的文章都是写自己回家晚的原因，但是作者在这篇文章中，却从另一个角度给我们展示了一种更为感人的亲情，自己回家已经很晚了，但是却并不是最晚的，爷爷回家的时间越晚，他的爱就深，很有创意的一篇文章，文章对于人物的动作描写很形象，将自己的紧张不安与爷爷的担忧都生动地体现了出来。但是文章内容有一些不太衔接自然，比如自己回家晚了很紧张，但是前文应该做一些铺垫，而爷爷很着急，妈妈却看上去有些平淡，这样的情景也不太合理，注意细节。