Today, last class teacher says suddenly: “ chief editor and subeditor stand up, you stay finally revise 5 stars composition! ” our apace stands up, promised a teacher.
今天，最后一节课老师突然说：“主编和副主编站起来，你们最后留下来修改五星作文！”我们快速地站起来，答应了老师。
“ bites clank bites clank ” finishs class the bell rang, I am taking paper of one pile composition and Li Mingxuan, Liu Fujian to be assembled in together, serious ground is being revised. Actually, it is so difficult that modification composition also is done not have, we should be illogical misprint and statement suitable, or the word circle of over comes out. Still can discover a lot of joy in this process, be like a word that Liu Fujian writes: …… of drawer of ”“ of the table since “ otherwise, freezer, tea table, cup, milk, case how? I just just said, li Mingxuan and I had laughed to go up receive what do not receive next energy of life, also laughed at even him Liu Fujian, it is good to passed a little while, we ability is sober come down, continue to revising ……作文吧 WWW.zuOwEnBa.Net
“叮铛叮铛”下课铃响了，我拿着一大堆作文纸和李鸣煊、刘福健齐聚在一起，认真地修改着。其实，修改作文也没那么难，我们要把错字和语句不通顺，或多于的话圈出来。在这过程中还能发现很多乐趣，如刘福健写的一句话：“要不起桌子、冰箱、茶几、杯子、牛奶、箱子”“抽屉……怎么样？我才刚说，李鸣煊和我已经笑得上接不接下气的，就连刘福健自己也笑了，过了好一会，我们才冷静了下来，继续修改着……
“Yes! I call ” aloud, because I am revised eventually,was over. Almost at the same time, li Mingxuan and Liu Fu Jian also are revised end. Li Mingxuan offers: “ we send teacher office the composition together! ”“ is good! ” at this moment, two female subeditor offer: “ is flat and direct put to dais. We did not accept ” offer, gallopping go looking for teacher ……
“Yes！”我大声喊道，因为我终于修改完了。几乎同时，李鸣煊和刘福健也修改完毕。李鸣煊提议：“我们一起把作文送到老师办公室吧！”“好！”这时，两位女副主编提议到：“干脆直接放到讲台上。”我们没有接受提议，飞奔着去找老师……
We are precipitant igneous burn ground comes the office, ah! A person is done not have, the door still is shutting. Well? Strange, how is the teacher absent? the teacher cheated us, impossible, is the teacher the hither of come to an agreement or understanding? the teacher is not here at all. Right, it is for certain such! I considered a little while, li Mingxuan says suddenly: “ everybody comes quickly with me, the teacher is certain there! ” our demur does not say, run towards 4 buildings.
我们火急火燎地来到办公室，呀！一个人都没有，门还关着。咦？奇怪了，老师怎么不在呢？难道老师骗了我们，不可能，老师不是说好的在这边的吗？难道老师根本就不在这儿。没错，肯定是这样的！我琢磨了一会儿，李鸣煊突然说：“大家快跟我来，老师一定在那边！”我们二话不说，向着四楼跑去。
We come to 4 buildings, li Mingxuan is pointing to the door in front to say: “ is here! ” my come out boldly, nobody promises ……” of “ Dong Dong, passed a little while, ground of my one is assured and bold with justice says: “ Liming warmths ablaze, I saw you take wrong place to us! ” Li Mingxuan is forced to be able to say nothing.
我们来到了四楼，李鸣煊指着前面的门说：“就是这儿了！”我挺身而出，“咚咚……”没人答应，过了一会儿，我理直气壮地说：“李鸣煊，我看你给我们带错地方了吧！”李鸣煊只好无话可说。
such, we go to class again, handed in a composition.
就这样，我们又向班级走去，交了作文。(文/包闰轩)