Mom why boast I am really clever, let me tell.
妈妈为什么夸我真聪明呢，让我讲一讲吧。
That day, I classes are over come home, take examination paper to look to mom. At that time, mom is busy her housework is vivid, I say softly to mom: “ today second exam mark had come out, but I am taken an examination of not ideally. ” mother side works household edge to say to me: Which part is “ lose cent fiercer? I say ” : “ is a composition. ” next, mom puts down the housework of at hand, had received my examination paper, serious ground looks. Mom explains me patiently to say: “ writes a composition to notice careful is inscribed above all, through to the question the purpose understands and every main essential factor is analysed, hold thematic requirement integratedly, patulous train of thought. Train of thought is unlocked, the content that can keep becomes much. ”< ="">
那天，我放学回家，拿试卷给妈妈看。当时，妈妈忙着她的家务活，我轻声地对妈妈说：“今次的考试分数已经出来了，但我考得并不理想。”妈妈边干家务边对我说：“是哪部分失分比较厉害呢？”我说：“是作文。”然后，妈妈放下手头的家务，接过我的试卷，认真地看起来。妈妈耐心地解释给我说：“写作文首先注意审题，通过对题目的了解和每个重要的要素分析，综合把握题目的要求，扩展思路。思路一放开，可以写的内容就变多了。”
I know the word that heard mom to say to me, rescripted a composition looks to mom. Mom looked, laughing to say to me: “ you are really clever, the composition after be brought up can be written weller! ”
我认听了妈妈对我说的话，重写了一篇作文给妈妈看。妈妈看了，笑着对我说：“你真聪明，长大后作文会写得更好的！”
Mom asks to my exercise all along very severe, I know intention fine of mom is sufferred from, I am met well effort study. Thank you! Mom!
妈妈一向对我的作业要求都很严，我知道妈妈的用心良苦，我会好好的努力学习。谢谢你！妈妈！(文/黎梓琪)