This morning, I discover almost everybody's notebook is sent. My curiosity asks a class the delegate: “ my how was sent? His answer makes ” I am surprizing unceasingly. He says: “ has the language text of a few classmates to was not sent, because the first class should publish the teacher afternoon,be above written composition, recite the composition of these classmates to us namely. ” my thank goes gladly to the side of dais after her, see my notebook as expected, lying on the desktop of dais. My heart thinks, ah, too marvellous! My composition yesterday can let a teacher be recited in whole class!
今天早上，我发现几乎所有人的本子都发下来了。我好奇问课代表：“我的怎么没发下来呢？”他的回答令我惊喜不已。他说：“有几位同学的语文本没发下来，是因为老师下午第一节课要发表上面写的作文，也就是给我们朗读这些同学的作文。”我谢谢她之后便高兴的走到讲台边，果然看见我的本子，正躺在讲台的桌面上。我心想，呀，太棒了！我昨天的作文可以让老师在全班朗读啦！
Make me expect long already the first class arrived eventually afternoon. Attend class bell start shooting, the teacher goes. After she read the article of a few classmates, begin to read me. Some classmates bend over to go up in the table, upend auditive, two eyes glare is gotten greatly staring at a teacher, hearing the each word speech that I write seriously it seems that; Some classmates look at me agape, mouth Zhang Deda is big, appear to still can see a kind of admired eyes from her eye. I feel proud for myself really!
令我期盼已久的下午第一节课终于到了。上课铃打响了，老师走进来了。她读了一些同学的文章之后，就开始读我的。有的同学趴在桌子上，竖直了耳朵，两只眼睛瞪得大大的盯着老师，似乎在认真听我写的每一个字词；有的同学目瞪口呆的看着我，嘴巴张得大大的，从她的眼睛里似乎还可以看出一种佩服的眼神。我真为我自己感到自豪呀！
The teacher looks at me with complimentary eyes, say to whole class classmate: The composition that she writes “ is the language that pupil place uses not only, and handwriting also very carefully and nearly, ” of graffito of scratch of unlike some person. Listen to a teacher comment on, my heart thinks. Ah my progress but really big! The term that uses not only is much, and sentence also by the teacher complimentary speakand writevery beautifully. Sleep till in the evening I still do not restrain the sort of excitement in the heart and joyance, glad unceasingly.
老师用夸奖的眼神看着我，对全班同学说：“她写的作文不仅都是小学生所用的语言，而且字迹也很工整，不像有的人乱写乱画”。听完老师的点评，我心想。啊我的进步可真大呀！不仅所用的词语多，而且句子也被老师夸奖说写得很优美。直到晚上睡觉我仍克制不住心里的那种兴奋和喜悦，高兴不已。(文/Annie)