One, writing (50 minutes) (2020 Shenyang coil)
一、写作（50分）（2020沈阳卷）
Please from below in two problems optional one problem writes a composition.
请从下面两题中任选一题作文。
(1) the phosphor that the instruction of tireless of cany wild gentleman is Lu Xun, placatory suffer from in strange Gu alone; The violet Chinese wistaria that cultivates Cheng Fang is Zong Pu's phosphor, edified the comprehension of life. The phosphor that grow, twinkle every corner in the life. Listen respectfully composition, of comfort heart perplexed; Recital poem word, the journey of open culture. Warm speech, encouraged view, severe criticism …… is how-to direction, extend eye shot, for the force of the travel before we are brought.
（1）藤野先生不倦的教诲是鲁迅的启明星，抚慰了独在异乡的孤苦；一树盛放的紫藤萝是宗璞的启明星，启迪了生命的感悟。成长的启明星，闪烁在生活的每个角落。聆听乐曲，宽慰内心的迷惘；吟诵诗词，开启文化的旅行。温暖的话语、鼓励的目光、严厉的批评……指引方向、拓展视野，为我们带来前行的力量。
Please with“The Venus ” that is me is a title, write an article.
请以“ 是我的启明星”为题目，写一篇文章。
Requirement: ① complements the title please complete scribal go up in answering question card; ② divides poetry outside, style is not restricted, can feeling of narrate experience, express, publish opinion to wait; ③ handwriting carefully and nearly, write a standard, the word counts word of 600 ~ 800; Name of real full name, school does not appear please in ④ article; Must not cite in ⑤ article, borrowed this examination questions coils the material that reads understanding portion.< WWw.ZuowEnBA.neT >
要求：①请将题目补充完整并抄写在答题卡上；②除诗歌外，文体不限，可以记叙经历、抒发感情、发表见解等；③字迹工整，书写规范，字数600 ~ 800字；④文中请不要出现真实的姓名、校名；⑤文中不得引用、抄袭本试题卷阅读理解部分的材料。
Spread one page rice paper, on paper brandish asperses writing, hold the post of nib free and easy to rise and fall, or light or heavy, correct is like You Long. Mo Xiang, it is my phosphor, guide me to comprehend importunate meaning.
铺一页宣纸，于纸上挥洒笔墨，任笔尖跌宕起伏，或轻或重，矫若游龙。墨香，是我的启明星，带领我感悟坚持的意义。
Xia Ye, wind kiss leaf, give out the noise of rustle, very pleasant. Father sits up in the practise penmanship before desk, cast aside one right-falling stroke, static move blend, as strong wind, seem Gu bamboo. I also envisage father to write skill good word in that way, also sit up before desk then, the hand picks up earnestly lever of the first stroke of a Chinese character, begin begin to write or paint. Although shaft is light, bad however control, not a little while with respect to muscle ache. Can be each so nice on copybook word, in me the wording and purpose of what one writes twisted group of big ink stick however, the heart is medium grievance pole, feel wronged and act rashly then the ground abandoned a pen, lean sit before the desk. This is just like fall on the trail of beautiful full ground, go receiving the fruit of autumn day, unexpectedly, be surrounded by severe cold however, this kind sad it is self-evident, the self-confident flower in the heart also subsequently wither and fall.
夏夜，风轻拂叶，发出沙沙的响声，十分动听。父亲端坐在书桌前习字，一撇一捺，静动交融，如同劲风，好似孤竹。我也想像父亲那样写一手好字，于是也端坐在书桌前，手郑重地拈起笔杆，开始下笔。笔杆虽轻，却不好掌握，不一会儿就肌肉酸痛。可是字帖上一个个那么好看的字，在我笔下却扭成了大墨团，心中委屈极了，于是赌气地扔下了笔，倚坐在桌前。这就好比走在落花满地的小径上，去迎接秋日的果实，不料，却被严寒包围，这种伤心是不言而喻的，心中的自信之花也随之凋落。
At this moment, thrill through of a form, it is father, he was carrying new handwriting or painting to walk over, the shoulder that patting me says: “ child, work want carry sth through to the end, cannot abandon, I believe you can succeed certainly. ” my Wen Yan is stupefied, the self-confident flower in the heart is opened subsequently again. Take the first stroke of a Chinese character afresh, " much pagoda tablet " the word that go up each Wenrun rises, go at the beginning a silent is dumb absolutely acerbity, still be inflexible, write more, travel pen is gradually fluent, stipple circle is full, dignified and beautiful. Mo Xiang, it is my phosphor, let me comprehend importunate essence.
这时，一个身影闪过，是父亲，他端着新墨走了过来，拍着我的肩说：“孩子，做事要有始有终，不能放弃，我相信你一定会成功。”我闻言愣住，心中的自信之花又随之开放。重新拿起笔，《多宝塔碑》上的字一个个又温润起来，一开始行笔喑哑绝涩，仍是僵硬，越写，行笔渐渐流畅，点画圆整，端庄秀丽。墨香，是我的启明星，让我领悟坚持的真谛。
My disposition and nature blend in that to jump the Mo Xiangzhong that move gradually. Horizontal, be like green water, refracting slow air; Fu , be like green hill, declare publicly is worn infinite majesty; Cast aside, be like Chun Hua, sending out blossomming fragrance; Right-falling stroke, be like Qiu Shi, those who harvesting bright is golden. These words, dwell house is on the world of black and white alternate with, write is on the move, as if I am aspersing absolutely beautiful legend in brandish, sit in repeatedly aside father also speaks highly of: What “ writes is pretty good! ” Chinese ink is sweet, it is my phosphor, let me understand importunate significance.
我的脾气和秉性渐渐融入那跃动的墨香中。横，似绿水，折射着舒缓的旋律；竪，似青山，昭示着无限的威严；撇，似春华，散发着绽放的芬芳；捺，似秋实，收获着璀璨的金黄。这些字，栖居在黑白相间的世界上，执笔流转间，仿佛我在挥洒着绝美的传奇，连坐在一旁的父亲也夸赞道：“写的不错！”墨香，是我的启明星，让我懂得坚持的意义。
Write one page ink marks to stay sweet, sing a past to fly upwards. Today school work is heavy, but insist not to stop. Mo Xiang, it is my phosphor, let me understand that importunate true meaning.
写一页墨迹留香，唱一曲往事飞扬。今学业繁重，但坚持不辍。墨香，是我的启明星，让我领会那坚持的真谛。
Sea otter teacher comments on: Select material is exercise calligraphy copybook, the center is to comprehend importunate meaning. Select material can highlight a center effectively; The language is beautiful, if cast aside the analogy of the right-falling stroke to in any case, dramatic image, photographic. Clarity of train of thought, it is clear to explain the happening of a thing, development, final result explain the happening of a thing, development, final result; Drew up the common sense that practices the thing such as calligraphy, proviso law is to give his to inspire with importunate not close together nature joins between the meaning.
海龙老师点评：选材为练习书法字帖，中心是感悟坚持的意义。选材能有效突出中心；语言优美，如对横竖撇捺的比喻，生动形象，过目不忘。思路清晰，将一件事的发生、发展、结局交代清楚；写出了练习书法等事物的普遍意义，但书法是给自己启发与坚持的意义之间衔接并不紧密自然。(文/优秀老师王海龙)