世界上虽然没有最好的作文，但只要坚持不懈的努力改进，才会离最好的作文更近一步。成功好比一张梯子，“机会”是梯子两侧的长柱，“能力”是插在两个长柱之间的横木，只有长柱没有横木，梯子没有用处，抓住机会好好改进，才能登上成功。
Although there is no best essay in the world, as long as we persistently strive to improve, we will be one step closer to the best essay. Success is like a ladder; Opportunity” It's the long pillars on both sides of the ladder; Ability” It is a crossbar inserted between two long columns. Only when the long column does not have a crossbar, the ladder is useless. Seize the opportunity to improve and climb successfully.
在疫情期间，网上上课的方式已经在班里实行了许久，为了写出更好的作文，老师想出了许多好用的办法，与我们一同学习，就比如组建小组，让我们能够在网上进行讨论与学习，让我们抓住同学们提出的建议进一步改进，和同学们一起写作有着很多好处。可以看其他同学的作文学一学他们的优点，也可以进行少量的“模仿借鉴”，当然，自己独特的想法才是最珍贵的。[ www.zUOwEnBa.NeT ]
During the epidemic, online classes have been implemented in the classroom for a long time. In order to write better essays, teachers have come up with many useful ways to learn with us, such as forming groups where we can discuss and learn online, and seize the suggestions put forward by classmates to further improve. Writing together with classmates has many benefits. You can learn from other students' compositions to learn their strengths, or you can do a small amount of research; Imitation and reference; Of course, one's unique ideas are the most precious.
有了同学们宝贵的建议与老师三番五次的指导后，最后差的便是改进了。这就是写作文中极其重要的一步。在郭老师的带领下我们班的哪一篇作文不是经过三次以上修改。“只要功夫深，铁杵磨成针”要想把手中的铁杵磨练成针，就要经过日日夜夜的努力与坚持，不能怕苦怕累，更不能半途而废。“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”，相信总会有一天能乘风破浪，高高挂起云帆，你的所有努力都不是白费的，只有不停地向前，你才会成功。
After receiving valuable advice from classmates and repeated guidance from teachers, the only thing that fell short was improvement. This is an extremely important step in writing an essay. Under the guidance of Teacher Guo, which essay in our class has not undergone more than three revisions. “ As long as you work hard, an iron pestle can be ground into a needle; To turn the iron pestle in your hand into a needle, you need to work hard and persevere day and night. You cannot be afraid of hardship or fatigue, and you cannot give up halfway. “ Sometimes the wind breaks through the waves, and the sail hangs straight to sail across the vast sea; Believe that one day you will be able to ride the wind and waves, hang up your sails high, and all your efforts will not be in vain. Only by constantly moving forward can you succeed.
想到了之前写过的作文《那一刻3，我长大了》就是经过不停的修改而成的。好多次修改都不合格，当时我是很失望的，不过我怎么都没有放弃，经过不楟的思考与回想，我又重新改进了好多次，终于到最后时刻我成功了，虽然不能说是作文很成功，但我明白了“玉不琢不成器”不努力做到又怎么会成功呢？
I thought of the essay I wrote before, 'At That Moment 3, I Grew Up', which was constantly revised. I was very disappointed when I made many revisions, but I never gave up. After careful consideration and reflection, I improved many times and finally succeeded in the end. Although I cannot say that my essay was very successful, I understood; Jade without carving cannot become a vessel; How can one succeed without putting in effort?